Shifting the rubble
October 21, 2024
Here’s another poem, Shifting the rubble, from my recent poetry collection Guerrilla Country, available from the publisher Flight of the Dragonfly Press.
Were we to blame? To know, we’d have had
to go back to before it all began.
But everything was broken. We
were victims now — hungry and cold;
and scavengers, each finding warmth
and sustenance whereby we could;
unable to name who’d made us do______.
nor find the words for what we’d done.
Instead, we piled broken stones
and bricks where shops and homes had stood,
lit fires with beams and window frames,
swept clean the littered, pitted roads;
then formed an endless chain we handed
debris, piece by piece, along
unbid, returning every brick
and stone to the pile we’d picked it from.
We paused, subdued, as convoys passed,
then walked the streets we’d cleared — and walked
before — and stood to regard the ruins,
soaring, quiet; beautiful
in evening light: cathedral windows
opening the sight of sky
to sky; fragile memorials
to_______;
and wished them to subside.
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Hi Phil,
Very moving reading and verse. I am spending a lot of time with colleagues in the university agonizing over Gaza. For me this was a powerful portrait of Gaza on the ground. I rather thought it might be titled: A Prayer for Gaza. I suspect you are agonizing along with the rest of the world as we watch this travesty.
I hope you are well and thriving in your poetry and beyond. Do keep me on your list for future mailings. Your verse always arrives as a welcomed surprise and prompt to slow down and listen. Much welcomed.
Warm regards
Ray